My comments (only with regard to idea presented):


You starve them and they’ll breed

from numbers two to three (terrible writing on my part, I know; and their pence from one to less)

But will you care

Will you care?

Perhaps only for the mob

that strives

only to overthrow

Or is it just more

for fields

to have

more backs to break

more to toil

beneath your feet

And you call them dogs

but you told them

to eat

from the dish

and you said

“Good boy”


You don’t have be

You may have advantages


simply money

But like some of you

there are some that never will stand

The choice second handers

relegated by suppression





And like some of you

there are those

that never will bow

At best to fein weakness

to deliver the blow (though greatly hope not ever done by any, and it won’t ever be me)


And further still

there are a few

whose abilities



will rival those born

To become opressors

or squander

or help them to stand

I do not know


For those above

what I have descibed

they do grey

Each a class unto their own

As those with to be an individual case

so those without

The lines are not so distinct

Perhaps power the greatest boundry

but even with this

there is time

and with all the constancy

perhaps even a little

just a little



Fathers are wrong (I don’t know but at least my thought was you need to be, wherever you decide, you decide; parents it’s great to push but bit by bit let your children be)

You have so much


but the beauty within you

why don’t you see

I do


So I send this

I do not intend to steal your voice

to cause you pain

This my plea

break their bonds

free their minds

I don’t deserve


have power to extact

by force

even at my best

but I am ruins now

mostly by my own hand

I’ll not pretend

But what I love

What I see

I do see this


There’s a beauty within you

I wish you would see

The hell with survival o the fittest and all the rest (and I don’t speak of their god concept)

It may be all chemicals but

pretend you have a choice



So this my plea

My plea

My plea

My plea

My plea


My plea

My plea


I’m begging YOU

My plea

Free them

*Teach them

*but don’t endoctrinate them

*They can be as much as any

*They are *beautiful

*They are

*perhaps just chemicals, us

*But try to choose

*for them


(and “free”ing not to be read as wickedly)


(I’m sorry it’s so long for comments; and terrible in structure, style, and the rest. But it was the only way I thought to reply to this as I’m not very good at it. This is meant only my weak attempt at comments saying I hope you aren’t so angry with others as I read the views presented in the writing to be (but I know to draw the reader it’s often best to take a strong point so I assume that’s all this was. I enjoyed the writing style and it was thought provoking) My writing is only my weak attempt at a counter thought to the idea you present rather than anything else)